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This is my second entry. A more abstract and simplified version. Thanks

Kandidatura #44për E-Khattaba Logo
Kandidatura #44

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  • mohammedhaddad88
    mohammedhaddad88
    • 2 vite më parë

    show time

    • 2 vite më parë
  • LaCynn
    LaCynn
    • 2 vite më parë

    NICE!

    • 2 vite më parë
  • popohouse15
    popohouse15
    • 2 vite më parë

    very excellent logo

    • 2 vite më parë
  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
    • 3 vite më parë

    Hi, I've uploaded the revised version at entry #80.

    • 3 vite më parë
  • saraalmudhaf
    Krijuesi i Konkursit
    • 3 vite më parë

    I like the contrast in face size of the man's and woman's. I like that they are asymmetrical, not identical, and not a reflection.

    • 3 vite më parë
  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
    • 3 vite më parë

    Sure, right away.

    • 3 vite më parë
  • saraalmudhaf
    Krijuesi i Konkursit
    • 3 vite më parë

    I like how you filled the gap between the man's chin and woman's nose with a beard. So useful and very well utilized. However, I am not a fan of the negative space under the woman's chin. Would you experiment with that please or just close it up or minimize it. Thanks

    • 3 vite më parë
  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
    • 3 vite më parë

    Thank you four the insight. i will get back to you right away.

    • 3 vite më parë
  • saraalmudhaf
    Krijuesi i Konkursit
    • 3 vite më parë

    Try using the same mustache for the woman's lips. Change color and reflect (upside-down). Try slightly bigger eyes for both without eyelash for woman. This is also a characteristic of Arabian eyes. Try again a closed eye for the womanonly, this time with eyelash. I like the idea of the blush for the woman but not so much the execution (the blur). It is not in harmony with the whole style. I like the shadow of the ear and chin.

    • 3 vite më parë
    1. saraalmudhaf
      Krijuesi i Konkursit
      • 3 vite më parë

      I believe closed eyes will successfully communicate a forehead kiss and support the current position of the man over the woman. Check entry #47 for reference.

      • 3 vite më parë
  • saraalmudhaf
    Krijuesi i Konkursit
    • 3 vite më parë

    I love the color scheme.

    • 3 vite më parë
  • saraalmudhaf
    Krijuesi i Konkursit
    • 3 vite më parë

    I'm very happy.

    • 3 vite më parë
  • saraalmudhaf
    Krijuesi i Konkursit
    • 3 vite më parë

    Try to experiment with the gold headpiece for the woman. It would add more cultural context. Try to unify all gold stroke thickness including the black headpiece for the man (one thickness). Thank you.

    • 3 vite më parë
    1. saraalmudhaf
      Krijuesi i Konkursit
      • 3 vite më parë

      Entries #47 #36

      • 3 vite më parë
  • saraalmudhaf
    Krijuesi i Konkursit
    • 3 vite më parë

    I like the digital pattern design. Works very well with e- as in digital or electronic.

    • 3 vite më parë
  • saraalmudhaf
    Krijuesi i Konkursit
    • 3 vite më parë

    I can see a heart (right one). I like it.

    • 3 vite më parë
  • saraalmudhaf
    Krijuesi i Konkursit
    • 3 vite më parë

    I love it.

    • 3 vite më parë
  • saraalmudhaf
    Krijuesi i Konkursit
    • 3 vite më parë

    This is so far my very best! Thank you.

    • 3 vite më parë

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