Mature Pokemon story: Beta-writer - 11/04/2018 13:37 EDT

I am writing a Pokemon ficseries, and would like someone who can write stuff up in their own words. Examples of what I mean are attached as files, for comparison purposes between each chapter already online. In my original beta-writer's words, this is what is to be done: "Basically... "I wrote in an 'expansive' fashion. I took the stuff you did, and started by filling out paragraphs because yours seemed thin. Not every single one, but where it fit. "By doing that, I also focused on adding 'character' to the characters. Expose their personalities. Add tics and traits. So on and so forth. "And I also sexed it up 1000%." Requirements: -Must be capable of writing both male and female fanservice. This is in fact one of the reasons I am seeking someone out. Anyone who's been to Anime Fanservice Image Gallery or the Japanese fansite Pokesho should understand what I mean. -Must be capable of writing between 5-10K words, in your own words. -Outside-the-box thinking highly encouraged. I would prefer this be more than just an adaptation of the games with a gimmick attached. (I will show an outline of my story plans to anyone who shows some commitment, and we can discuss stuff to make happen along the way from there.) Rules: -You will be awarded the job AFTER you show me a sample of how well you can beta-write. -Please show me your work when I ask for it, and make any changes I request made. (If you have reasons not to, please run them by me.) -You will have 3 days to begin before I ask for your progress, and 7 days to finish up. When I contact you, I would like to see your WORK. Not words of assurance. I can extend your deadline if you need me to, but only if you have made enough progress to warrant such. -Please tell me how familiar you actually are with Pokemon, and especially the games, so that I know you read the rules. (If I see anything simplistic like "I played all the games to date," that leads me to believe you just made it up to get the job, you will not qualify for the job.)