Hello Alex,
I would be happy to edit and proofread Brain Storm for you. You have written it in the form of a play. I suggest that we chat here on Freelancer and discuss some details about the characters and the backstory behind Brain Storm, then I can go to work on making it a novella for you. I believe your story will have the most success in the Young Adult market.
To edit your book, I may add more descriptive details to help the reader visualize what is happening in the story. I will keep the dialogue as you have written it, and make sure the story is divided into chapters. I will rework sentences to include the details given in the current play format. When I am finished, your story will be a novella.
Let me introduce myself. My name is Julie Webb, and I’m a professional editor and proofreader with 36 years of experience, which includes working on a wide variety of fiction books, and also nonfiction, spiritual and self-help books. I enjoy working with authors, so if you have any questions, just ask me!
My 198 employers have given me an excellent rating. 4.9 out of 5, as shown at https://www.freelancer.com/u/jw010699.html. My employers have said, “Great person, goes above and beyond to help me in the project, and superb job done. Will hire her again.” “Julie does excellent and professional work.” “Great! Julie, thank you a lot for your attentive editing!"
I would enjoy editing Brain Storm, and hope to hear from you soon.
Best regards,
Julie Webb