Hello Greg,
I bid on your previous project. I'm very interested in helping you get the best book possible published. I'm willing to work with you, provide you feedback, help with editing and proofreading.
I'm a full-time ghostwriter, working primarily in erotic romance. I'm confident I can help you with plot, structure, and continuity in your story. If you think your story is great, then let's work together to get it published.
I know what it's like to always add more content (since I'm adding to my proposal) but as I said in my other proposal, for a first novel, publishers tend to not want to even read the first chapter of a novel that's over 260,000. Maybe you have enough material for two novels.
The strategy I'd use for you would be to read through the novel, marking issues I see with clarity, story arc, character development, etc. and look for the parts that might be cut or reduced. From there, you can rewrite the sections, and working together we can get a story that's better than 50 Shades of Gray.
Feel free to contact me through private message, and we can discuss any questions you might have.
Sincerely,
Carol McKenzie